Tuesday, October 14, 2014

The Dead Whisperor


by Briana C

This story is about a 14 year old little girl who experiences what she thinks is "love" but it turns out to be the worst mistake of her life; each event was recorded in her personal diary.



The young character's name is Nancy   and she falls for an older guy Collin who is an 18 year old freshman in college, Nancy attended a concert to watch her favorite artist perform when suddenly the crowd got wild because a fight broke out. Collin sees her and helped her get out of the crowd he apparently had his eyes on her for a while because he instantly starts putting moves on her. Nancy starts to develop a strong like for him and they are casually seeing each other she likes him a lot so she spends majority of her time with him. He appears to be the perfect guy for her he calls himself "the white king" and gives her a lot of affection; he has her wrapped around his finger like a dog and a leash. One day Nancy has the house to herself and decides that it would cool to invite Collin over when he came over he cooked dinner for the both of them and slipped something into her drink, she notices the weird taste but she doesn't let it bother her. Minutes go by and she starts to feel uneasy Collin then starts to act like a different person , feeling and touching all over her Nancy and she doesn't know how to feel about it. He then mentions to her that their relationship is no longer just friendly and next thing you know he lays her on her mother's bed and rapes her, she is helpless and thinks about the rape a lot but she doesn't tell anyone about it. She is dealing with heart break and a feeling of disgust and emptiness, weeks go by and she has a come and go sickness and goes to see a doctor, the doctor tells her that she has the aids and her life is destroyed the story was a great read and it touched my heart.

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